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Reflection: I realized that I needed to dress more professionally. I also got feedback that my video should be longer and I should be more enthusiastic. I think all of the feedback I received on my last pitch video were fairly accurate and I acknowledged them so I would be better the next time
Change: I decided to dress more professionally for this video because you have to dress to impress. I also made my pitch a little longer than my other two pitches. Also, I tried to be more enthusiastic for the audience and explain how our product differs from the competitors.
Reed,
ReplyDeleteAfter watching your video, you did exactly as you said. You were dressed professionally, and you seemed enthusiastic! I think you did a great job on this elevator pitch. I liked your pitch, too! I hate sweaty controllers. I think it is one of the grossest things. I would totally be up to purchasing your product if that meant not having any more controllers that were sweaty!
Hey Reed, great pitch. I know it is tough but the only thing I would recommend is next time have someone actually film you so you aren't so close to the camera. The pitch was on point though. You showed the reason that your product would be beneficial and even making the comparisons to the grips that are made for comfort verses sweat was really smart. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteReed,
ReplyDeleteAfter watching your video, you did exactly as you said. You were dressed professionally, and you seemed enthusiastic! I think you did a great job on this elevator pitch. I liked your pitch, too! I hate sweaty controllers. I think it is one of the grossest things. I would totally be up to purchasing your product if that meant not having any more controllers that were sweaty!
Hey Reed! Awesome Pitch! I really identified with the image of your brand you are trying to push forward! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what you submit next.
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