Elevator Pitch
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The feedback that I received on my last pitch video was that I was not active enough with the audience and that I did not explain the benefits of my controller adequately enough.
Thus, for Elevator Pitch No. 2, I decided to be more active with the audience by speaking directly to them and by walking around the room. I also outlined the benefits of my product and why you should get mine compared to the competition.
Hey Reed,
ReplyDeletewhile I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch I think that there's a lot that you could have done better. You sound kinda weird in your video and you don't look professional at all... like c'mon Reed get your act together man you can get through this.
Reed,
ReplyDeleteOnce again, you have an excellent business idea that is clearly in demand today. Although I felt a little more enthusiasm in this elevator pitch, there is still more work to be done. Your physical appearance did not seem professional, and your speaking could use more excitement. When a potential customer listens to a products' creator, they want to get excited and feel the passion in the entrepreneur. I can't say I got that from you. You spoke very clearly but try mixing things up a bit! Be innovative!
Reed, This is a great idea and I don't think anybody is not agreeing with you. I would say the only thing needed is a more professional look. Its fine for this setting of just students but you well know in the real business world your pitch would need more professionalism in there. Besides that it was good.
ReplyDeleteReed,
ReplyDeleteThis is much better from your first pitch. As said before, your enthusiasm lacked a bit but was a major improvement from your last one. Your product is great, but don't forget that the key to marketing begins with the elevator pitch. Im sure after a couple more takes and some more practice your pitch is going to be perfect.